Looking for beta readers

RaphLuna

Teeny Tiny Baby Pony
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I'm new to this stage in writing.

I need a beta reader who has a modest time to read over my manuscript. What I'm looking for is this type of feedback from a beta reader...

– Which parts did you dislike or not like as much, and why?

– Are there parts where you wanted to skip ahead or put the book down?

– Which parts resonated with you and/or moved you emotionally?

– Which parts should be condensed or even deleted?

– Which parts should be elaborated on or brought more to life?

– Are there any confusing parts? What confused you?

– Which characters did you really connect to?

– Which characters need more development or focus?

I do not expect someone to fully read my written works. Life is busy, people have a lot going on in their lives as is.

even if it's just a few chapters every bit helps.

If you can help steer me In the right direction. Or know of a Reliable Beta Reader who does provide feedback.

It would be greatly appreciated.

Thank You.

Laurie.
 

Skybreeze

80s Glam Rock Pony
MLPTP Supporter
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  • 1,000 Messages
  • MLPTP Bronze Level Supporter
I wish I had the time to help out, unfortunately I’m so busy with work lately I don’t think I’d be able to do you a good review. :(
 

MegaLeafeon

I'm crazy about Minty!!!
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I'm new to this stage in writing.

I need a beta reader who has a modest time to read over my manuscript. What I'm looking for is this type of feedback from a beta reader...

– Which parts did you dislike or not like as much, and why?

– Are there parts where you wanted to skip ahead or put the book down?

– Which parts resonated with you and/or moved you emotionally?

– Which parts should be condensed or even deleted?

– Which parts should be elaborated on or brought more to life?

– Are there any confusing parts? What confused you?

– Which characters did you really connect to?

– Which characters need more development or focus?

I do not expect someone to fully read my written works. Life is busy, people have a lot going on in their lives as is.

even if it's just a few chapters every bit helps.

If you can help steer me In the right direction. Or know of a Reliable Beta Reader who does provide feedback.

It would be greatly appreciated.

Thank You.

Laurie.
What genre is it?
I have a hard time reading horror and avoid it whenever possible. I also don't read romance. And I get board reading autobiographies and history books...

Althoooough if it's fantasy and or science fiction sign me up!
I will stay up at night wondering what happens next!
 
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