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I've redone my persona's story.
Enjoy!
PROLOUGE*Is this spelled right???Please correct me if not*
Down in the dungeons,of a old castle,a purple pony held her daughter close,looking upset.â€SnowCrystal!â€She called softly.â€A white pony with light blue hair came over to the window of the cell.â€Yes,Your Majesty?â€She asked,bowing.â€Snowcrystal,â€The purple pony said.â€You must take Starwinks away form here,it’s too dangerous.â€â€But ,My Queen,how will I know what to do with her?â€â€Take her down to the village nearby,and leave her on a doorstep.â€â€â€But what if they aren’t kind ponies?â€Snow asked.â€You will know,Snowcrystal.â€The purple pony took a rather beat-up basket and placed her daughter in it.â€Take this.â€She said.â€Oh,and this.â€She also put in the basket a piece of old parchment,with the wordsâ€Starwinksâ€on it.She handed Snow Crystal the basket through the bars of the window.â€Now go,GO!â€She cried.Snowcrystal bowed.â€I will keep her safe.â€She said,She galloped off,leaving the purple pony alone.The pony looked out the window,and a single tear dripped down her face.
This begins the story
HOOFBEATS
The story of the Last of the Winged Unicorns
Enjoy!
PROLOUGE*Is this spelled right???Please correct me if not*
Down in the dungeons,of a old castle,a purple pony held her daughter close,looking upset.â€SnowCrystal!â€She called softly.â€A white pony with light blue hair came over to the window of the cell.â€Yes,Your Majesty?â€She asked,bowing.â€Snowcrystal,â€The purple pony said.â€You must take Starwinks away form here,it’s too dangerous.â€â€But ,My Queen,how will I know what to do with her?â€â€Take her down to the village nearby,and leave her on a doorstep.â€â€â€But what if they aren’t kind ponies?â€Snow asked.â€You will know,Snowcrystal.â€The purple pony took a rather beat-up basket and placed her daughter in it.â€Take this.â€She said.â€Oh,and this.â€She also put in the basket a piece of old parchment,with the wordsâ€Starwinksâ€on it.She handed Snow Crystal the basket through the bars of the window.â€Now go,GO!â€She cried.Snowcrystal bowed.â€I will keep her safe.â€She said,She galloped off,leaving the purple pony alone.The pony looked out the window,and a single tear dripped down her face.
This begins the story
HOOFBEATS
The story of the Last of the Winged Unicorns