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Lets write a story guys!

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1. G/PG Rated
2. You cannot type more than one paragraph at a time (roughly 5 sentences)
3. Your paragraph must continue from the paragraph above your post.
4. PLEASE make sure you see all of the previous comments before
you start writing your paragraph so the story doesn't overlap.
4. Have fun! ​
 
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Once upon a time in a land of all things ponies, there was of course, ponies. They came in all shapes in sizes such as Pegasus, Earth, Unicorn, Alicorn and even non-ponies! Everyone was content in their busy lives. The place was a super happy place, no one ever had a frown. Until one day, when the most vile creature came into the land.
 
Tangelo received his name because he has stolen EVERY tangerine in the land of ponies. He wanted to take over all of the citrus fruits, for it makes him more powerful. He did not like that the ponies were able to make such sweet foods and drinks for their friends with the fruits. He sadly did not have any friends.
 
But he did have a daughter, his precious princess kumquat. She adored citrus sweets of every variety, from Lemon Sherbet Cupcakes with Buttercream Frosting, to tangy tarts topped with delicate peeks of whipped cream, and endless cups of tart and bitter sweet citrus teas.
her appetite could not be satisfied.
she would beg her father endlessly for more before she had even emptied her plate!
what was a dotting farther to do, but steal as many of the juicy little fruits as he could carry!
 
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There was no time for Tangelo to make friends. Kumquat wanted all of the sweets to herself. Her father took the bad rep for her, just to keep her happy. He’s really not that bad of a guy and he tries to do everything for his dear daughter since her mothers disappearance.
 
The princess had always enjoyed sweets but not like this.
Something was amiss, princess Kumquats strange behaviors had started 3 years ago.
when she had wandered to far into the enchanted forest.
There she stayed for three day's, and three nights, when she finally stumbled out of the thicket she was found by a palace guard on patrol.
She was quickly carried inside the castle and tended to by a medicine mixer.
Her delicate deer body was so thin you could count every rib.
her once luxuriously soft yellow fur was now stained with mud and grass.
her long emerald locks were a nest of tangled foliage, and purple vines.
When she awoke she felt a hunger like never before.
Her father desperately gave her whatever food he could find.
But she was still hungry. Her appetite could not be quenched
Her mother sick with worry, set out to find a cure to her daughters illness and has not been seen since.
 
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meanwhile in A near by pony village ponies fear that tangelo might come at anytime to take all citrus fruit and sweet that they work so hard to get and make for all their friends but one day three ponies finally had enough with all the stealing and want to find out what was going on one of the brave ponies name was lemon meringue his body was yellow and his hair was white with little bit of brown
 
Another member was triple berry treat a berry baker pony, with soft strawberry pink fur, cherry red hair with green stripes, and a bubbly disposition.
Her cutie mark is a cherry a strawberry and a red raspberry
 
Their third friend wanted to fallow along, though he didn’t like citrus anyways, but he wanted to help his friends. His name was Potato Greens. A dusty pony with dark broken fur and sandy hair.
 
Meanwhile trying to find a cure for her daughter, Clementine had many adventures in the far off villages. She met many kinds of creatures, but none willing to give any guidance to a cure for fear of making Tangelo angry. She tried to explain he was not evil or corrupt, he was just trying to help his daughters thirst for the sweet tender fruits. No one understood as they had never heard of anything like this before. Until one day she met...
 
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One day On her journey Clementine encountered A gypsy owl sitting on a log under an ancient tree.
She had long white feathers and was clothed in luxurious and ordinate fabrics.
elegant gold jewelry hung around her neck and bandana,
Her gold ankle bracelets jungle like bells as she stands to greet Clementine.
Let me introduce myself, My name is Myra, what brings an elegant creature such as yourself to my neck of the woods hmmm?

It's a pleasure to make your acquaintance I'm queen Clementine, I'm in search for a cure to my daughter's curse
She has a Thirst that cannot be quenched, and a hunger that can not be satiated, it all started when she went into a forbidden forest 2 years ago.

I could give you the answer you seek said Myra, but it will cost you hmmm.

With excitement Clementine eagerly shouted oh yes please! I'll pay any price to save my beloved daughter!

Then follow me hmmm.

A wave of relief washes over Clementine as she follows Myra into her caravan, once inside Clementine gasps in amazement, every wall is decorated in delicate little glass bits and bobbles hanging from string.
your home is simply lovely miss Myra! Clementine exclaims

Thank you, it is quiet nice, I certainly injoy it's dazzling shine, I'm a collector you see, when I see something of stunning beauty, I simply must keep it for myself.
Would you be so kind as to sit down my dear.
I shall prepare us some tea hmmm.

Clementines heart, and mind, start to race could it be? finally after 2 long year's of searching, could I finally have the answer I've been searching for?
Will I finally get to see my daughter again?
Outloud Clementine blurted, Please miss Myra, might we skip the refreshments and simply discus the matter of curing my daughter's curse?

Good things come to those who wait dear, wouldn't you agree? hmmm

Imbaraced by her outburst Clementine apologies
Yes of course, please take your time.

The two of them sip their herbal tea in silence as Clementine trys not to look to inpatient sitting on the small wood perch Myra calls a chair.

When the tea was gone Myra looked Clementine directly in her golden eyes and held contact, without blinking.
Finally she spoke,
I will need a tuft of your fur as part of my payment

Relieved that there was conversation again after such an uncomfortable silence Clementine replied oh of course please help yourself.

Myra leans over her tea table and with a snip of her shears collects a tuft of golden orange fur.
She then places the lock of fur in a ordinate heart shaped locket, and adds that to her collection around her neck

With a small laugh Myra replies your daughter has been cursed by a siren that lives in the whispering waters of the ancient forest, clearly your child had offend her greatly to receive such a curse of this level.
The only way to save her is to convince Sarina the siren that she has learned her lesson.

Oh thank you! I must be going now! Clementine jumps up from the perch and bolts for the door but as soon as she reaches the bottom step of the caravan a gold chain made of light appears around her neck, on the other end of the chain Myras cackling can be heard.

The price for this information is your freedom my dear!
You will be the most stunning addition to my collection yet! Hohoho!

Back to modern day (one year after this had happened) in the pony village
 
While walking up to the new found group, Potato Greens yawns as he meets up with the two mares. "So... are we really gonna beat up this Tangelo guy? Can we do it tomorrow? I kind of want to just relax today." The lazy little pony wanted to help out his friends, but also just wanted to have a sandwich.
 
Triple berry treat replies no po, we're gonna ask him nicely to stop stealing because stealing is wrong!

lemon meringue sighs, Trip you can't just expect that everyone is nice, and reasonable, all the time.
that said we shouldn't beat him up ether, let's just go there and scope out the situation.

Trip jumps up with excitement, ok! Let's gooo! I'm gonna pack my saddle bag with every thing we need!

Not before you finish your breakfast young lady!

But grandma elder berrry, trip whined, I'm just so excited to go!

Where is it you kids are going again?

To the river, po replies with a mouthful of blueberry muffin.

That's fine then, just be back before dinner kids, grandma turns and go's back to her jam making.
 
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sweet and sour lemon meringues little sister comes skipping her yellow and green pig tails bouncing as she enters the room from outside, can I come? she says
lemon meringue: no sis you can't come this time we plan on staying at the lake for a long time and I don't want you to miss school.
Lemons sister looks at grandma elder berry with her big yellow puppy dog eye's, please tell them I can go granny elder berry! I want to have fun with the big kids!
Grandma looks up from pouring cooled jam into jars, no sweetie your brother is right you should go to school.
Disappointed she snags the last blue berry muffin off of the table and heads home, most likely to beg mom to let her skip school.
 
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scoffing as the last muffin is taken, potato scrunches his nose. “Well, let’s head to this “lake” then, while rolling his eyes as he sloths out the door.

Tangelo in the meantime brings but only 3 fruits to his daughter, for he is running out of sources for his daughters hunger.

“This is not good enough enough!” Exclaims the Princess as she slams the table with her hooves.
 
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How am I expected to make it though the morning on such a small amount of fruit!

My apologies darling, I have been preoccupied with matters that do not concern you.

the matters in which tangelo speaks of, is the gaping hole that used to be the treasury, once filled to the brim with beautiful glittering gold, and gemstones, now mere Penney's in the pit, for he had spent most of his wealth on the baker's, and juice makers, who were creating the delicious delicacies that his daughter had become accustomed to scarfing.
After three long years there was not much left to pay the worker's.
he would have to start stealing gold as well...
Once again tangelo set's out like so many times before to retrieve his prizes.

Wherever you are my beloved Clementine, please find a cure, and return to us so that we may once again enjoy each other's companie as a family.
 
Now on route to tangelos castle in the foggy forest.

Triple berry treat skips happily alongside lemon meringue as they walk.

She is seemingly unfazed by her heavy saddlebags, potato trials behind the group and seriously considers turning around and going home to his hammock.


lemon meringue holds up his hoof to sigh for a stop.

Triple berry shocked by the sudden hault trips, and falls, flat on her face.

potato scoffs at her, i see your living up to your Nick name he says sarcastically

Teary eyed she pouts.

meringue shooshs them, I thought I heard someone or something following us.
 
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crouched behind a small bush, sweet and sour holds her breath and hope's that her bright white cote is not poking through the brush.
Convinced that no one is following them lemon helps trip up from the ground and they continue walking.
 
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